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OMG, stop the incessant referral to characters by their eye color. Yes, eyes can be expressive, but they're not the end-all, be-all of character interaction. If read one more story in which "blue eyes met brown" I am just going to vomit. And then take the characters' names and do a 'find and replace all' for eye references.

Date: 2005-12-19 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jan-aq.livejournal.com
Hahaha, I will be sure to remember and refrain myself if I have more than one pair of eyes meeting another.

Date: 2005-12-19 01:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penfold-x.livejournal.com
Well, I think once in a while it's okay. So long as you don't have the eyes meeting/locking/deeping, etc., every other line. ;)

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